joakmayoka's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Cave of Courage]

sound cyberpunkl for me. like a city in night.. maybe a cave in the night whir .... huh cybperunk cave or something like that... nice bread btw. yeah is tooo cruchy. but still good. you can use audicity for chop that frequency i guess.. good song (remind me of touhou in certain way)

7Breadian responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'll try to make my next song at least a little bit less crunchy.

Also, I quite like Touhou music because of how melodic it is.

Glad you like the bread!

[meadow patrol]

cute

[Earthclub]

very great, you just vibe whit this and that is cool..

[Subatronic]

the drop don´t feel like a drop, aside of that, is not bad, more work on the use of the kick and blabla, very great start tbh.

MrMcMusic responds:

Thank you!

[Reflection]

I listened to it in full, and I really like the progression. The tension in the chords contrasts nicely with the indecisive melody. However, the hi-hat that starts around 0:40 doesn't quite convince me; it feels a bit too “blank,” especially since it repeats. Maybe applying a filter behind it or using a different hi-hat sound could enhance it.

Aside from that, the instrumentation is good; the piano paired with synthesizers works well—simple but effective. However, I believe that for such a long track, it would have been better to incorporate more instruments. The final decision to add that bass is excellent; it truly feels like you're approaching something significant.

Overall, I see potential here! New follow—just don’t give up and never stop dreaming

Weaselhawk responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I'll take it into consideration.

[Dog'N'Bass]

dogs are better than cats, is great

[Fuge Ignem]

i like the drop